EPISODE 1/2
THE ENEMY WITHIN
 

Rev 1.2
22/04/2000
Copyright HiQ^ productions.... :P
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As you can see there has been some more changes, I have been working on it as much as
possible, inserting, removing and revising scenes. It is evolving into a script and
looks like its getting better though more complex...
Gotten rid of that icky "Duel of Fate" but still kept the fight.
I was tempted to label this 2.0 but that WOULD be going a bit too far...
I would like to pay special tribute to windows, which always seem to crash right before i save this thing!
I would also like to apologise for the use of Microsoft Word as this got a tad too big for notepad.
Hell! I’d like to apologise for Microsoft period...

Mark - Jedi Master
  Wise, experienced, weathered, short-tempered... appears to have inner demons to contend with as well as the sith
  struggles to stay on the light side..... and keep control

Guy -  Jedi Knight
  Former apprentice of Mark Born on Correlia, orphaned at a young age after a rival family killed his whole family... after a business squable, being betrayed by his
   family's advisor Young, rash (for a jedi), not so trusting, inquisitive, confident, a gifted fighter...

Beau - Sith Lord / Jedi Master
  An old and trusted member of the jedi council  He has the unique ability to hide the alignment of his powers...
   even from others strong in the force...  His intentions are unknown(atm) a powerful fighter, weathered, strong, and overwhelming at times....

Brendan -Sith Warrior
  Apprentice to Beau Rejected years earlier by the jedi council for being too old  then recruited by beau and trained in the dark side of the force
  arrogant and extremely cocky (though some even say that it is earned) enjoys a good fight, though will only fight thoughs he thinks are worthy
   (a blaster deflection is a good test....)

 
START
 A secret jedi training centre has been destroyed and some sacred jedi scriptures have been taken. Only those on the council and those on the planet know of its location. (There is a teaser below).

***NEW SCENE***
Mark and Guy have just finished negotiations in the <whatever> system, they say farewells and depart, very peaceful alderaanish planet, we see their ship leave the planet and take the jump to hyperspace. They have a conversation onboard the ship (along the lines of
Guy: "I can't believe they managed to agree"
Mark: "It's all very simple when you understand their way of thinking
 the <race1> are a <blah blah> people....")
Later through the trip or conversation... Mark acts surprised or sense of shock....
Mark: "I sense a disturbance in the force..." and rushes out of the room to the cockpit, Guy then follows a few seconds later...
Mark: "Please change the ship's direction to the coordinates as i am entering them..."
The Captain just looks at them and nods... (This is highly unusual but is not entirely
unexpected when one has a jedi onboard).

(Next scene)
The ship pulls out of hyperspace next to a derelict freighter, orbitting a red planet,
skip to the bridge,
1st officer: "Sensors detect that the ships engines are dead and its shield are  inactive."
Mark: "I think we should dock and investigate."
Guy: "Is that wise master?"
Mark: "I sense the remnants of a dark presence from that ship."
Captain: "I will send a team of my best men to accompany you"
Mark: "very well..."
1st Officer: "sensors detect a new ship in the vicinity, must have entered from the
 other side of that planet"
Guy: "Isn't that Beau's ship? i heard that he had some business to conduct in this  sector..."
Mark: "Indeed it is, perhaps he will be able to assist us in our investigation"

Shot of a shuttle coming around from the other side of the planet (out of the shadow)

<VOICE ONLY TRANSMISSION>
Beau: "Ahh... Mark do you need assistance?"
Mark: "How fortunate you were in the area, did you feel the disturbance?"
Beau: "Yes i did feel the...(pause) disturbance... it was most... unsettling..."
Beau: "I will dock with your ship and we shall proceed together, i believe this to be  the best course of action at this time."
Mark: "Understood, we shall await your arrival."
<END TRANSMISSION>

Beau's shuttle docks with Mark's and then we see Beau's shuttle take off and then dock with the freighter.

We see (from the inside) the door being cut open, it is dark inside and someone enters with a rebreather mask on, holding something reminiscent of a tricorder and wearing a torch.
Person1(presumably to a radio): "Sensors detect that the air is breathable, barely, i
 recommend that we get life-support back on before we proceed.."
Person1 then looks to their right and boots up a system... the lights in the corridor turn themselves on.
Person1: "And then there was light..."

Shot from outside the ship the lights turning themselves on and we hear a powering up sound.

We see our jedi and crew enter the ship, the crew are manning the terminals and have opened access panels and some are accompanying the jedi as they walk to the bridge.

Guy: "There does not seem to be any signs of a skirmish, no blast marks, no bodies, no  markings on the ship...."
Mark: "Something is not quite right here..."
Beau: "There must be some reason why this ship is in this condition..."
Mark: "I believe our answers will lie in the bridge..."

The Bridge doors open and we see the crew eagerly rush in and take control of the major systems. The Jedi then enter sweeping the room with a glance.

Crew1: The ships logs have been wiped... there is no trace of anything remote which  will lead to the identification of this vessel."
Guy: "And the ship's manifest?"
Crew1: "That too is a blank" (shakes his head)
Mark: "Is there anything unusual on the ship's internal sensors?"
Crew2: "Just us... nothing unusual... hmmm....."
Mark: "Ensign?"
Crew2: "All the life-pods are accounted for..."
Mark: "I think it would be best if we not rely on sensors, whomever, or whatever left  this ship here did go to a lot of trouble to cover their tracks. I suggest that  it would be prudent if we not rely on them completely as if one was trying to  hide something one would certainly tamper with sensors so one's cargo would not  be detected."
Guy (nods): "and whatever this cargo that is, must be of great value for one to abandon  one's ship..."
Beau (to a crewmember): "Can the ship's sensors be plugged directly to an external  system bypassing the main computer?"
Crew2: "It's possible but it will take some time..."
Beau: "You have until..."
Mark: "Take all the time you need... i feel we shall be here for some time..."
Mark and Guy leave the bridge, leaving Beau behind with the crew.

Our two jedi are now walking down a corridor to the cargo hold... (Gee all these corridors look alike... HINT! HINT!).
Guy: “Master, what makes you so sure that the cargo is still here?”
Mark: “If whoever it was had collected their cargo, this ship would not be here, they  were cautious enough to arrange for the ship to be abandoned and ‘cleaned’, they  would not leave this vessel intact for any to find.”
Guy nods as if it were common sense.

They reach the cargo hold to find it empty.
Guy looks around in astonishment.
Mark: “I suspected as much... empty... as would all of the others be...”
Guy: “Then what we are looking for is something small yet contains great value,
 whomever the collector may be is taking some risk in allowing for the ship to be  left unguarded... unless...”
Guy breaks of his deep thought...with enthusiasm...
Guy: “It would be of no value to anyone else who found it... and anyone who would  acquire a derelict ship this large would arouse suspicion... which is probably  what ships travelling in this part of the sector are trying to avoid.”
Mark smiles and nods his head in agreement.
Guy: “Then whatever it is we are looking for is most likely hidden in the living  quarters of the ship, the place safest place onboard this model of starship, the  place least likely to take damage from any form of attack or equipment  malfunction.
Mark: “You are forgetting the escape pods, if the cargo were of more value than the  ship whomever it was may choose to jettison the cargo in case of an emergency or  chance of the destruction of the ship.”
Guy nods at his master’s addendum.
Guy: “Though the escape pods are the items most likely to be salvaged first as they  fetch quite a high price on the market. Whomever left this here must have known  the risks.”
Mark: “Then we will split up and search the ship, there is no need for us to search  together as we now know what we are looking for, and where to find it, remember  my pupil, trust your feelings...”
They then leave together.

We switch scenes between Guy and Mark systematically searching the rooms (all identical in reality and for convenience). Guy is then drawn by some mystical energy (the force),
to a hidden panel, he then removes the panel to discover a container (chest), he then uses his communicator to call Mark (looks like one of those whistlepop lollies or could user another tricorder)
Guy: “I’m in room 2537... I have something you should see”

(New Scene) Mark has arrived.
We see that Guy has waited for Mark to arrive before removing the chest.
Mark: “I do not sense any riggings or traps...”
Guy: “Nor do I...”
Mark then removes the chest from the panel and places it on the floor.
He then breaks the seal and opens the chest.
Guy: “Corusca Gems!!!...”
Mark: “Only available from the core of certain types of gas giants... there are few  willing to supply them and fewer who are in search of them...”
Guy: “Unless you are to use them to make an energy weapon...”
Mark: “Look carefully, my apprentice, the size and uniformness of each gem...”
Guy: “Lightsabers!!??... but who...”
Mark: “That I fear is what we are going to find out...”
Mark closes the chest and lifts it.
Mark: “This must be brought to the attention of the council at once.”

***END OF NEW SCENE***

Now a few days later the scene will open with a conversation between Guy and Mark.

(Scene: On a balcony on Coruscant)
Guy: “But why just one casket?... If one was to willing to abandon a whole ship, surely  one would want more than just the one casket?”
Mark: “Do not forget that Corusca gems are hard to acquire without attracting the wrong  type of attention, especially the specifications of these.”
Guy: “Did you not detect a dark presence? Perhaps whomever it was managed to retrieve  all but this one then was alarmed by our presence...”
Mark: “That is a possibility... There are forces at work here beyond our comprehension  that may reveal themselves in the near future...”
Guy: “Is that a premonition?”
Mark: “No, just instinct...”
Guy: “Has there been any word from Kanel?”
Mark: “Unfortunately no, the supply ship was due back a week ago, but I’m sure your  friend is doing well.”
Guy: “It’s just that I have this feeling...”
Mark: “It is almost time for the council to be called into session, there is much to  discuss...”
Mark then heads off, with Guy following.

(New Scene: Jedi Council)
A hallway leading up to a circular room where them members are arranged into a semicircle of sorts, there are a few members there, Beau is already seated. A few of the members have their apprentices behind them, some like Beau, do not. There are a few official-looking people there, like the Chancellor, and others who have business with the Council. They are standing. Mark and Guy arrive midway of the conversation between the council members and the Chancellor.
Council1: “I do apologise Chancellor we can not allow ourselves to become directly  involved in the conflict between the people of Ryka ! and Ryka IV. Both sides  have refused our offers of mediation, and the safety of our jedi and their ship’s  crew have been threatened.”
Chancellor: “I appreciate your assistance in the matter, unfortunately this is an   internal squabble and the alliance has very little authority in the matter.”
Mark: “Has there been any word of our missing supply ship?”
Admiral steps forward.
Admiral: “Unfortunately there has been no communications with the ship, that area of  space is known for it’s interference on inter-stellar communications. I assure  you this is matter is high priority, some of my best men were assigned to that  ship.”
Guy whispers something to his master.
Mark: “I request that a party be formed to investigate the matter, there may have been  occurrence at the academy which requires our immediate attention.”
Council1: “So it shall be... Are there any volunteers?”
Mark: “I will go, and my apprentice seems eager to follow...”
Beau stands up.
Beau: “I too would like to go...”
Admiral: “A ship appropriate to the mission parameters shall be assigned to you as well  as the crew.”
Mark: “Thank you Admiral... we shall depart as soon as our preparations are completed.”
(End Scene)

(New Scene: Docking Bay)
Millennium Falcon Style... the Captain is polishing something near the landing ramp, In the background we see ground crew moving cargo around the docking bay. Mark and Guy arrive followed by Beau.
Guy: “Greetings Captain, Are we ready for departure?”
Captain: “Just making a few last minute adjustments”
The Jedi then proceed up the ramp onto the ship.
First mate comes up to the Captain (either from behind the ramp or from inside the ship).
Captain: “Looking at our little ’entourage’ looks like we are in for an interesting  trip.”
1st mate either nods or growls.
Captain(if first mate can’t talk): “Either way... at least we get paid...”
smiles at counterpart.

(Shot: Ship leaves atmosphere and enters hyperspace)

(Scene: Outside shot of Sith Mother-ship)
Then shot of inside.
Brendan on his ship somewhere in space talking to his master
(cloaked and identity hidden) reporting his success and complaining about how it was too easy and expressing his wish for a "worthy" adversary. Master then assures him it will be soon...

(change of scene) Jedi ship has reached the planet on ship now and are scanning the planet hologram effect (see theforce.net) or monitor with that funky planet thing we saw at sharb's
They arrive on the planet and rush to inspect the two dead bodies... and see the cloak
Guy - "i sense a disturbance in the force"... Mark agrees and Beau inspects the bodies to find the burns... Beau - "only a light saber could do this much damage", the rest nod.
 
 
 
 
 
 

Beau suggests that they split up so they can cover more ground quicker... so they do
Now just shots of all of them moving around by themselves.....alone.......
Beau is in the inner sanctum and retrieves something off the computer system (or master's body whichever is easier...) Guy arrives and stays hidden from Beau watching him at work. He decides to keep it a secret from Beau and leaves quietly.
The group rendezvous at the shuttle and discuss what they find.... a cloak, lightsaber burns,
several blaster wounds and missing data crystals......
they come up with the conclusion that whoever did this was not alone and was extremely
dangerous and strong in the force. they decide to give a proper burial to the fallen
and return to the council.

(shot of the ship taking off)

(ship leaving planet then entering hyperspace)

(skip to city shot then back to the balcony)
Guy and Mark have a discussion saying that the person knew exactly what they were doing and where they were going, meaning they would have had to had access to information that only Jedi council members could obtain. Conclusion: There was a traitor in the council and they must tread more carefully in the future. The traitor must be found quickly and they must not alert the attention of the council. ("if the council knew..." blah blah blah speech)
Guy tells Mark about his suspicions about beau.... Mark says to wait until they have more proof before confronting him and they must wait until the time is right. Since Beau has been on the council longer than Mark.

(New scene: Jedi Council)
The jedi council later meets and they bring their findings to it... they conclude that
it was the work of the sith..... and this sith must be found as soon as possible no matter what the cost. A emergency hologram message is launched saying the jedi archives are being attacked then leads to static (if this effect is too hard then just send in a messenger). the party of four once again sets off to the archives to locate this sith...

(shot of ship landing on pad re:RoJ endor/yavin 4 type planet) they split up and search
the archives.
Someone fires some laser blasts at Mark and he deflects them easily and
pursues the shooter (thus leading him away from the others)... we switch scene to the
others. Guy follows Beau and decides to confront him... alone (Our four way fight
scene begins).
Guy/Mark (either will do) notice a device has been planted and is counting down...
they continue fighting until the sith withdraw.... disappearing into the shadows...
And we see them run....

(Next scene is the jedi ship leaving the base and it explodes behind them)

(Scene:onboard the ship) The two jedi are discussing their next move (backdrop is a
window with stars rmb: the ship is moving fast) What are they to do? Who will believe
them?..... Mark makes the decision that he expose Beau to the council no matter what the cost... he cannot allow Beau to mislead the council anymore.
(i.e. hate anger fuels him and thus will be detected by the council....)

(skip to next scene: Beau and Brendan aboard their ship)
Beau informs Brendan that everything has gone according to plan except for the
interfering jedi... they got the information they needed and the end game is beginning...
Brendan asks if Beau will go back to the jedi council... Beau says he will....
Beau is confident that Mark will be helpless before the council and that Beau is safe in his position
 

(Next Scene) Jedi Council (Beau is not present)
Mark storms into the council with Guy following... everyone looks at them...
Mark puts forward his argument about the traitor being Beau.... but some of the members
CAN NOT believe that Beau had evaded their detection for that long (if anyone has watched babylon5 think Delenn and the Grey Council)... Council refuses....

(next Scene Beau has returned)
Beau enters the council chambers the room goes dead quiet....
Mark blocks his way, and ignites his sabre... says something along the line of "i will not stand by and watch you make a mockery of this council", Beau makes a plea to the council(just a look no words spoken), there is no response (as if the council is still in the process of making a decision, council members look at each other, not a word is spoken), Beau lights his sabre believing his cover blown, and proceeds to duel Mark, Mark proves himself to be a strong opponent and begins to overwhelm Beau, as Beau
restrains himself trying to control his feelings (so that his evil intentions are not shown), Mark strikes Beau strongly and Beau blocks the blow, however the blow is so strong that it forces him down to his knee, Beau struggles to force Mark away using every ounce of concentration and in doing so his facial expression turns to anger, but only a split second then it changes back to normal, however this is long enough to expose himself, the council members simultaneously focus at the battle,
some with looks of shock on their faces, a grimness washes over the room, music can reflect this, meanwhile Mark is finishing up the battle, as Beau is no match while restraining his true power, he is subdued, sabre knocked away, and Mark has his sabre at his throat forcing him to admit his dark intentions and to surrender, Beau refuses ('NEVER!') Beau places his hand on Mark's chest and we see lightining erupt from his hand into Mark's chest, Marks sabre retracts and Mark body drops limp, Beau shrugs off the unconscious body and takes off, (Mark is merely in a Jedi trance to induce
recovery from the terminal blow), Mark's body suddenly comes to life and he lies on the ground clutching his chest, breathing heavily. Guy rushes to help Mark and then turns to pursue Beau, Mark raises one hand to reach out for Guy, "No, let him go, we have done what we came to do...". Guy turns around and helps his master stand, supporting him with his own body. He looks toward the council with a look saying
"How could You have let this happen", The Jedi council members bow their heads with an ounce of shame, Guy helps his master out of the room, and then we fade to black ending with a shot of outside the council room looking inwards.

A squadron of Alliance fighters pursue Beau's ship, we see Beau's shuttle enter hyperspace and then the
fighters follow,

(next Scene Beau is onboard the shuttle)
Beau contacts Brendan on the ships's communicator.... "I am being pursued by several Alliance vessels"
Brendan: "They will be taken care of as soon as you arrive"
Beau transmits some coordinates to Brendan.

 
(next scene Beaus's ship arrives)
Then a few seconds later the fighters arrive, we can have shots of the pilot's communicating.
"where did he go", "nothing on sensors"
"This is Echo leader to any Alliance ship, we have pursued the traitor to the Jarec system, please respond",
echo2: "My sensors detect a unusually high amount of Magnetic interference in the
 vicinity i'm not sure if the signal can get through".
Echo Leader: looks at his/her  console, pauses for a second, "It's a trap!", a laser bolt comes from behind them and destroys the fighter bringing up the rear of the formation.
"Echo group break formation", another ship is hit,

we see the 3 remaining fighters narrowly avoid a volley of deadly laser beams.
E1: "we have got to get a message back to Coruscant"
E2: "i found the mother ship bearing 2 3 mark 5"
E1: "i see it, my sensors detect multiple bogeys appearing"
We show a squadron of fighters come out of the hanger, Brendan is in the lead one.
B: "You may do what you please with the remaining ships but the lead is mine!"
B2: "understood"
B: "they can not be allowed to clear the jamming field or escape."

Change back to Echo group.
E2: "Judging by the size of the Mother-ship, We should be clear of the jamming field in 10 clicks"
E3: "But the Bogey's will have us in firing range in 3"
E1: "we have get through! HQ must be informed!"
E2: "Echo Leader go for it, i'll stay back and provide a screen"
E3: "Right here with you Echo 2, let's return them the favour"

The 2 rear ships of the formation turn 180 degrees and start heading towards the incoming fighters.

Back to Echo Leader’s Cockipit
E1: "May the force be with you"
E2: "forget about that just make it home!... 5 seconds till firing range"
E2: "3"
E2: "2"
We see Echo Leader close his eyes and flicks a switch on the console...
He knows that he will never see them again.
He checks his rear scanners, enemy ships remaining out of the original 5, but 2 are turning around, However the one remaining is gaining quickly.
E1: "At this rate, he'll get me way before i make the jump, i should be near the edge of the jamming field soon...."
E1: "This is Echo Leader to any alliance vessel, we have pursued the traitor to the  Jarec system, repeat we have pursued the traitor to the jarec system, There is a  large force in orbit of the fifth planet, please respond, is there anyone out  there?"
The ship shudders as a blast impacts on its rear shields, a near miss, Echo leader winces and takes evasive action, dodging two stray blasts. The ship rolls and strafes however the pursuing ship Echo Leader loops round and comes up behind Brendan's ship.
Brendan smiles.
Echo leader's ship starts firing however Brendan's ship easily dodges the blast,
The pursuing ship gets close to B's and B flicks a switch, something from the rear of the ship detaches
and E's ship avoids it only to have it explode near the ship.
E1: "My left wing has been disabled.... hell"
B's ship gains some ground and turns around and returns to finish the job. The two ships trade fire
until E's ship erupts in a ball of flames. B's ship takes a stray hit and veers off....
 

Brendan’s cockpit:
He then redirects the ship towards the mothership. B relaxes.... Beaus's image appears on the screen
Beau: "you have done well my apprentice, was he a skilled opponent?"
Brendan: "I was careless..."
Beau: "Very well, we have much to discuss upon your return..."
END TRANSMISSION

(New Scene: Jedi council)
There is a system map (starcon 3 style) hologram in the centre with a cone from the centre outwards. The council are sitting in a semi-circle, with Mark Guy on one side, the Admiral and the Chancellor on the other.
Admiral: "It has been a day since we have lost contact with Echo squadron. All we know  is the hyperspace vector they took. We are currently dispatching a rescue fleet  to search for them, however our resources are currently strained due several  minor conflicts which have erupted on the outer rim"
Mark: "I have no doubt that the sith are behind this, they are the greater threat at  this moment and they are vulnerable they must be dealt with quickly before they  can strike again.
Guy: "We must locate them before they have a chance to move their forces."
Chancellor: "We have more pressing matters at hand, I can only spare a small   consignment of ships, as the admiral has stated, we have many matters to deal  with at this point in time"
Council Member: "I am afraid they are right, we must act quickly before more harm has  been caused, we ourselves are partly responsible for this situation."
Admiral: "I will personally be leading the fleet as we search each system for these  renegades."
Mark: "I insist that my apprentice and i accompany you, the sith are more dangerous  than you could ever imagine"
Council Member: "Then you join several others who have volunteered for this  mission....."
The Council member signals for several jedi knights to step forward.
Council Member 2: "They too carry the burden of understanding..."
Admiral: : "At this very moment we have dispatched a craft to probe the systems on the  vector to the maximum range of the shuttle, It shall meet up with us on route and  we shall then proceed to assault their base of operations."
Mark: "Then it is agreed. We leave immediately."

(Change of scene)
An Alliance ship (corellian corvette?) has located the Sith Ship orbiting a planet
but had been destroyed after reporting their location. (oooh space battle)

(Change of Scene: Fleet command)
Picture of fleet, orbitting a planet. then change to bridge of flagship.
Admiral standing behind the Comms officer looking at the viewscreen, he then moves to where Mark and Guy are standing.
Admiral: "We just received a transmission from the Artemis a few moments ago.....  unfortunately the transmission breaksup midway......"
The Admiral pauses in respect for the dead....
Admiral then pushes the button and the transmission starts up.
Artemis' Comms Officer: "Fleet Command, We are under heavy attack, We have located the  enemy mothership, it is orbiting the fifth planet of the Jarec system, their  fleet consists of the mothership and about 5 cruisers, we request immediate  assistance, repeat we require immed....<static>"
Mark: "Then that is where we will go..."
Shot of the ships jumping to hyperspace.

(Perhaps a Babylon5 Earth Destroyer or the Excalibur but sadly Star Trek looks too
advanced... Z-95s would be appropriate but not x-wings or a-wings....y-wings maybe..... but what would look really cool would be the "Hammerhead" fighters from
Space: Above and Beyond.)

(our Braveheart scene...lol)
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The four of us fight into the base for some cool techno scenery.....
Guy forces Brendan off the edge of a platform and then leaves to assist Mark
Mark is pinned to the ground by Beau and has lost his saber...
Mark surrenders to the force (think Ben Kenobi) and Beau delivers the killing blow
Guy arrives just in time to see Beau kill his master
He screams "Noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" and rushes and attacks Beau
Beau sees that Guy is filled with anger and rage..... he smiles and laughs while he fights (Guy is succumbing to the dark side....)
Beau taunts Guy... Guy becomes more furious and swipes harder and faster though Beau is
easily deflecting the blows..... Guy suddenly hears his Master's voice warning him away
from the dark side.... and to trust his feelings and regain control....
don't let his emotions rule him...
Guy regains control and pauses the battle....he checks his grip and takes his stance...
His face formerly filled with rage is now filled with concentration and the wisdom of
the ages.... Beau's smile disappears as he has realised wat has happened...
He recomposes himself and the two commence a spectacular battle...
Guy manages to kill Beau... and barely alive himself proceeds up further into the base... Brendan arrives out of nowhere (apparently he survived somehow...)
lightsaber ignites.
Guy lights up his and they fight this time Brendan is faster and stronger but Guy is more skilled, Guy has learned to focus his powers and his concentration...
Guy breaks Brendan's blade.... destroying its power source... he turns off his blade and walks past Brendan.... Brendan is pissed.... he pulls out his hidden daggers and attacks. Guy pulls out his saber and the two fight, Guy blocking and dodging each one of Brendan's attacks....(note Brendan will have to be quite flexible as kicks are needed for this attack) and several jumping bits..... Guy will be hit by a couple of kicks but will be relatively unhurt.... Brendan is once again forced off the edge of the platform... he slashes at Guy's leg (or arm) as he falls.... Guy collapses to the floor in agony...
The Jedi Knights enter the base securing it and they call a medic....
(end scene: fade out)
(new scene onboard a ship)
Guy is in bed surrounded by two jedi on each side a window is there (re: tESB)
overlooking the sith planet...
Ben arrives... they greet each other...
Ben: "Are they all...."
Guy: "I don't know..."
Ben: "What were they up to?"
Guy continues staring at the planet (a few beats)
Guy: "Whatever it was... we are all going to feel it sooner or later..."
(zoom out of window and onto ship then fade to black)
 

 
This teaser is help establish the plot that there is a reason that a sith warrior would openly attack a jedi installation, there must be something to gain, beyond just open destruction.
Teaser:
 a large ship approaches a small (planet/moon)
 a smaller craft leaves and approaches the (planet/moon)....
 craft lands.... a dark cloaked figure comes down the ramp....
 two jedi approach and sensing evil ignite their lightsabers
 figure pulls out his and ignites one blade...
 <flash>
  inner sanctum  - old jedi master in his chair movemnt around him...
    searches room and pulls out and old dusty wooden box.
 <flash>
  outside - figure throws his cloak at one jedi and proceeds to disembowl
   the other then takes care of the one covered in his cloak
   (a lighsaber cuts through the cloak but rmb the mass of the cloak
   so it will just continue to go and smother...if needed a little
   force assistance can be used). figure now continues into the complex
 <flash>
  inside - some jedi apprentices are ready to defend their master with
   lightsabers drawn and ready (perhaps them igniting their lightsabers
   for effect)
 <flash>
  now inside - Figure lights up his blade and then pan an image of the      jedi apprentices from behind the sith (implied battle)
 <flash>
  inner sanctum - old jedi master is now on edge (looks as if he has just
    felt the death of everyone else)... looks around...
    he opens the box.... a lightsaber is there... he takes it
 <flash>
  inner sanctum - a shot from behind the jedi at the entrance
    (over the shoulder maybe) as the sith approaches
    (no weapons drawn at the moment)
 (close up of sith)
  sith - get out of my way old man
 (zoom out to see both in the same shot) *silence*
 (zoom in on jedi)
  jedi - i shall never yield to the dark side
 (now sith)
  sith - then your mistake shall be the end of you!
 (on jedi)
  (jedi now has a closer look at the sith- horrified look on his face)
  jedi - no, it can't be, i remember you.... those many years ago you were
   too old to train... too old...
 (now sith -close up)
  *smile*
  sith - now we shall which side is the stronger...
 (sith body shot)
  *draws and ignites the double blade*
 (jedi face shot)
  regains composure wipes face to pure concentration
 (jedi body shot)
  *ignites saber and gets into stance*
 (long shot of the two for a few seconds)
 (now focus on sith running)
  sith charges and they cross blades
 (shot of the two crossing blades mid sections up both in the shot)
 (flash)
  a ship takes off from the surface of the planet...
 (flash)
  a lightsaber rolls down a flight of stairs.....
 <fade to black>